Discussion in 'Appraisal Gallery' started by lfc1892, May 19, 2017.
black-nd-yello-black-nd-yello by lfc-1892, on Flickr
your thoughts would be great.
I know the can was already there, but it still looks staged. If you needed it, think I would have had it over the last full yellow stripe. That way you "find" it rather than it stops your eye.
Thanks Mike. The can I almost removed, to simplify things, but just couldn't settle on a composition I was happy with with regards to angles and perspective etc, and this was the only one I was happy with. Although I've got a couple front on too, which work fairly well, but in those the can is tiny, which may be a good thing. How does the shadow on the rhs work for you?
Shadow looks OK. Maybe the can half in it?
Can't remember what I have on file but I'll take a peek and post up later if I have anything like that Mike. One advantage of the front on shot was that the can is tiny in the frame and so is an embellishment as opposed to a major element. I'll post in a bit, thanks.
Like this for me:
I'll nip out and buy a can of coke for when I'm next there
It's definitely better with less can. Thanks Mike
there is a difference in art and photography,some take photos and some take photos by artful manner and you shows art in this photo.
Very kind words, thank you
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