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black and yellow

Discussion in 'Appraisal Gallery' started by lfc1892, May 19, 2017.

  1. lfc1892

    lfc1892 Well-Known Member

  2. RovingMike

    RovingMike Crucifixion's a doddle...

    I know the can was already there, but it still looks staged. If you needed it, think I would have had it over the last full yellow stripe. That way you "find" it rather than it stops your eye.
     
  3. lfc1892

    lfc1892 Well-Known Member

    Thanks Mike. The can I almost removed, to simplify things, but just couldn't settle on a composition I was happy with with regards to angles and perspective etc, and this was the only one I was happy with. Although I've got a couple front on too, which work fairly well, but in those the can is tiny, which may be a good thing. How does the shadow on the rhs work for you?
     
  4. RovingMike

    RovingMike Crucifixion's a doddle...

    Shadow looks OK. Maybe the can half in it?
     
  5. lfc1892

    lfc1892 Well-Known Member

    Can't remember what I have on file but I'll take a peek and post up later if I have anything like that Mike. One advantage of the front on shot was that the can is tiny in the frame and so is an embellishment as opposed to a major element. I'll post in a bit, thanks.
     
  6. RovingMike

    RovingMike Crucifixion's a doddle...

    Like this for me:

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  7. lfc1892

    lfc1892 Well-Known Member

    I'll nip out and buy a can of coke for when I'm next there :)
    It's definitely better with less can. Thanks Mike
     
  8. there is a difference in art and photography,some take photos and some take photos by artful manner and you shows art in this photo.
     
  9. lfc1892

    lfc1892 Well-Known Member

    Very kind words, thank you
     

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